NO, PERO WHY? Show your mind changing. Tools A revised take can be stronger than a perfect-sounding first take. YOUR WORKING TEMPLATE My first explanation: The material or account that challenged it: What I changed: What I kept and why: What remains unresolved: A FILLED EXAMPLE First take: younger visitors caused the delay. New material: the equipment log. Revision: the projector delayed the start; arrival times alone do not establish the cause. Still unknown: whether any other delays occurred. BEFORE YOU SHARE Can a reader follow why you changed your mind? MAKE IT YOURS Use the notes space below, copy the prompts into your own document, or download the worksheet. A voice note or paper version works too. READING John Dewey: Reflective inquiry https://www.gutenberg.org/cache/epub/37423/pg37423-images.html This is a foundation for our revision tasks, not evidence that this particular app improves learning outcomes. MY NOTES