Show your mind changing.
A revised take can be stronger than a perfect-sounding first take.
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First take: younger visitors caused the delay. New material: the equipment log. Revision: the projector delayed the start; arrival times alone do not establish the cause. Still unknown: whether any other delays occurred.
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