Show how your thinking changed

Keep your first take and your revised take side by side.

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My first explanation:
The material or account that challenged it:
What I changed:
What I kept and why:
What remains unresolved:

A filled example

First take: younger visitors caused the delay. New material: the equipment log. Revision: the projector delayed the start; arrival times alone do not establish the cause. Still unknown: whether any other delays occurred.

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